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Subterranean is an online forum RP. Taking place in No Era, where time no longer ticks. The planet no longer spins, one side is illuminated by it's red sun and on the other site it's cloudy black murky world where the moon is shrouded by thick black cloud
 
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Mirun

Mirun


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Join date : 2009-04-05

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PostSubject: Play War...........   Play War........... EmptyThu Apr 30, 2009 8:06 pm

Play War

My children play
In the sandbox
With their little planes
My children play
In the sandbox
With their rocks

A child throws
The plane to far
Lands in the big kids
Sand castle

All the little ones
Run as the big kids come
To the smalls kids box

Now a fight breaks out
The big kids hit the little
Kids so hard

They drop the rocks down
They break their planes
And the children never involved
Become part of the spray

These children playing war
All to coin the term one day
He tried to kill my daddy

But where is daddy in this war
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caribbean_chick




Posts : 10
Join date : 2009-04-23
Age : 33
Location : Caribbean

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PostSubject: Re: Play War...........   Play War........... EmptyWed May 06, 2009 7:46 pm

WOW!
I like it, its simple & deep
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*Miyako

*Miyako


Posts : 180
Join date : 2009-04-06
Age : 32
Location : Anywhere my dreams take me

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PostSubject: Re: Play War...........   Play War........... EmptySat Jun 06, 2009 8:52 am

i haven't taken time to acutaly read what's in the literature area and now i'm glad i took the time. it is deep and has a universal meaning. I like it.
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