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Subterranean is an online forum RP. Taking place in No Era, where time no longer ticks. The planet no longer spins, one side is illuminated by it's red sun and on the other site it's cloudy black murky world where the moon is shrouded by thick black cloud
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 33 Location : Caribbean
Subject: Poetry :cherry: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:26 am
I know I'm not the only one who writes poetry so post yours too. I'd appreciate constructive criticism. If you think it SUCKS! Then Shut the Hell up... No, I'm kidding, send me a personal message so no one else can see how much u hate it.
caribbean_chick
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 33 Location : Caribbean
Subject: Re: Poetry :cherry: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:32 am
Good & Evil Laughter and Cries I'm firmly unable To see things through your eyes.
Sunshine & Rainfall Living & Dead You're firmly indifferent to the Callousness I shed
Monstrous Beauty Loving then Hate We're always disagreeing Yet we never separate
Slience and Screaming Bleak Skies & Stars In anger and tenacity Our conversations NEVER get far.
Angels that haunt us And Demonds that Flee We're bittersweet and imperfect Yet, we're meant to be
I can't understand why I love you And why you love me back But the tide pulls us closer As opposites attract.
*Miyako
Posts : 180 Join date : 2009-04-06 Age : 32 Location : Anywhere my dreams take me
Subject: Re: Poetry :cherry: Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:24 am
wow that's really impresive. though it is more or less a preconceved veiw on good vs evil. just because it looks like it will kill you dosen't mean it wants to. ya get my meaning?