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caribbean_chick



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Age : 28
Location : Caribbean

PostSubject: Poetry :cherry:   Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:26 am

I know I'm not the only one who writes poetry so post yours too.
I'd appreciate constructive criticism. If you think it SUCKS! Then Shut the Hell up...
No, I'm kidding, send me a personal message so no one else can see how much u hate it.
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caribbean_chick



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PostSubject: Re: Poetry :cherry:   Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:32 am

Good & Evil
Laughter and Cries
I'm firmly unable
To see things through your eyes.

Sunshine & Rainfall
Living & Dead
You're firmly indifferent to the
Callousness I shed

Monstrous Beauty
Loving then Hate
We're always disagreeing
Yet we never separate

Slience and Screaming
Bleak Skies & Stars
In anger and tenacity
Our conversations NEVER get far.

Angels that haunt us
And Demonds that Flee
We're bittersweet and imperfect
Yet, we're meant to be

I can't understand why I love you
And why you love me back
But the tide pulls us closer
As opposites attract
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Location : Anywhere my dreams take me

PostSubject: Re: Poetry :cherry:   Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:24 am

wow that's really impresive. though it is more or less a preconceved veiw on good vs evil. just because it looks like it will kill you dosen't mean it wants to. ya get my meaning?
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